Red velvet rain, flowed within
relentless regrets, down the river
Lost emotions abstain
Rain, red, relentless, river, regrets.
Poetry challenge #41: In the rain
You have the imagination of an Expressionist painter. The juxtaposition of ‘kissing rainbow’ and ‘featherless dove’ is slightly disturbing and out of kilter. Food for thought, as you say.
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