Mistake

chris jensenAugust 6, 2016Uncategorized

Elusive as a fallen dream

quiet storm of a hidden thought

walked lightly upon. life stream…

Each step placed lazily,

a forgiven mistake, one life to take

hard calming, silent scream…

Published by chris jensen

i am no different than any other human, struggling throughout life's disadvantages... As i have been learning throughout my own poetry, whom i could be! A gifted child..... View all posts by chris jensen

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Tosha Michelle says:

August 9, 2016 at 1:53 pm

Well written.

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1. chris jensen says:
  
  August 9, 2016 at 4:53 pm
  
  That means a lot to me,
  
  thank you,
  
  however today, i’ve written some real
  
  stinkers…
  
  An’t that the truth!
  
  chris
  
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  1. Tosha Michelle says:
    
    August 9, 2016 at 5:02 pm
    
    It’s all subjective.
    
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  2. chris jensen says:
    
    August 9, 2016 at 7:08 pm
    
    Damn, women you’re making think or should be honest, i had to look-up the word “subjective” in doing so,
    
    found i am more lost in the sentence or should i have said the comment?
    
    A personal question;
    
    are you truly as beautiful as the image you have given within the gravatar?
    
    Or would that be subjective?
    
    lol
    
    chris
    
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