Sentencing throughout
lost time..
Turning tide, electrified,
sadly happen
before i realized..
A question of reasoning..
Why! Do they
continue to try..
i find unbelievable
beyond intelligent,
an to keep
on rebounding..
No fear of sleep,
throughout the city
creatively we keep
i’m thrown into driven lov,
as virtuous pity…
ShockingTideRealized
Buona domenica 🙂
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Lovely, but it might need a bit of editing regarding a few spelling mistakes 😊
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Such as where!
could you edit,
place in comments, please?
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i finding unbelievable = I find unbelievable
an to keep = and to keep
i’m thrown into driven lov = I’m thrown into driven love/low (depending on the meaning)
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i’ve made one change, all others are written the way i desire!
methanks!
chris
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