Heavy persuasion
dark dissolution
creative illumination..
Whispering eye
lustfully we tried..
As we prayed
for death,
in unusable ways…
Tis a mind’s window
tear driven eyes..
Searching for lov
an drugs, throughout the elegant
dancing waltz,
soft driven desire..
To get high…
Sorted treasure
laughter an lov..
Life’s hidden pleasure.
Lost an driven
from god’s heaven..
Banished!
Turned away
from
high above….
No Heaven indeed…the stuff done in the name of religion is great ..thinking about churches and cathedrals but that does nothing to atone for the appalling harm done in so many ways…wars, indoctrination, child abuse and the like. Wishing you , though! all the best for the coming year. xx
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They’ve built wonderful building on the blood of man an in the name of a god, whom never walked this earth or anywhere for that matter…
Yet, in this day an age, they still fight for their lies.. Even i still light a candle for my grandmother, when i know all to well there is no god!
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I feel it!
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You feel what?
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I relate to the more negative feelings of the poem.. I have that way.
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i most write, what i believe in… Not often will i step out of those thoughts… i know if i write what they want to read, i could do much better…
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Follow your heart , your mind, write what you want to write! I think you are doing fine!!!
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F-ck up, insecure neurotic and emotional
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